Question: Most scientists agree that the world’s climate has now reached its critical threshold. What are the reasons for this and what could be its consequences?
Critical Threshold of the World’s Climate
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Nowadays, the climate in the world has fluctuated over time between hotter and cooler. Most scientists think that it is time for the world’s climate to reach a critical threshold. In my opinion, I agree with this notion and I will give the reasons and consequences about this.
First of all, natural factors are one of the causes of the critical threshold of the world's climate. In recent times, there have been many volcanic eruptions. Volcanoes release clouds of dust and ash that block the sun, resulting in a temporary cooling effect. In addition, volcanoes often emit sulphur dioxide (SO2) and also release greenhouse gases such as CO2 into the atmosphere. This has led to periods of global warming due to the well-known greenhouse effect which led to global temperature increase. Consequently, the climate will fluctuate, people will lose their land to live which will make life difficult, and the economy will not develop.
The critical threshold of the world’s climate is mainly the consequence of the anthropogenic production of greenhouse gases. The most abundant of the gases is carbon dioxide, which is produced by burning fossil fuels. When CO2 enters the atmosphere, these gases trap heat, causing the Earth to become warmer. This has led to temperatures being higher, and water increasing in volume in a process. Warmer temperatures also cause polar ice caps and high-latitude glaciers to melt which leads to sea level rise. For this reason, the entire island country may become submerged, many species may lose their habitable habitat.
To sum up, it is time for the world’s climate to reach a critical threshold. Earth’s life is endangered. Therefore, we must act immediately, and take practical measures to protect the earth as well as to protect our own lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19397993311 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76537921852 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1781849948 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7368421053 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259248249243 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905377049807 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11299845457 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191424223456 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10814871352 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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