Some Vietnamese people these days find different ways in order to settle down in a developed country. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing so?
In the context of the constantly developing economy with the increasing trend of exchanges and cooperation between countries in the world, every year, thousands of Vietnamese go abroad to work. But then, there are people who choose to stay in that country instead of going back to their homeland. I believe that this issue has its pros and cons, which will be discussed in this essay.
In terms of benefits, living in another country can be an exciting experience because it is an opportunity to gain more knowledge at work and experience a new culture. In famous labor markets such as Japan, Korea or European countries with modern production lines and the most advanced technologies, it creates motivation and premise for employees to learn from other colleagues' experiences and at the same time improve language in the process of working. another good reason to live abroad is to learn more about another culture. In fact, it is also an opportunity to live, explore and experience interesting cultures and customs of indigenous people. For instance, you can travel to each region of the world that has its own cultural diversity with unique new customs and enjoy attractive traditional dishes with different flavors.
With regard to its drawbacks, there are the difficulties in adapting to the working environment and the financial problems. Indeed, it can be seen that the office culture in each country is completely different, especially between Eastern countries and Western countries in terms of communication or working culture. Along with the cultural environment in the workplace that requires employees to adapt quickly, one of the next disadvantages of living abroad is the cost of living and expenses. expensive rental fees make the quality of life of overseas residents inevitably precarious and difficult, especially at the beginning of work.
All in all, if you are thinking about where to live, consider all of these benefits and make a decision that is right for you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Another
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for instance, in fact, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 965.302439024 174% => OK
No of words: 324.0 196.424390244 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18518518519 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83772085582 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 106.607317073 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 283.868780488 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4377392589 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.082566285528 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283504114293 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312870796637 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509855558783 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276451208933 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 40.7170731707 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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