Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Advancement of technology brought a massive impact on our society by obtaining services, information and tasks rapidly. I believe this has drawbacks for every individual like decreasing the essence of humanity and being an impatient person in society.
other people might perceive that there are fringe benefits to this advent of technology. For example, work would be simplified in every household since the availability of equipment like vacuum cleaning would swiftly finish the task, aside from this, food delivery is accessible by using a mobile phone without delays. Thus, people would get those essential needs easily in the comfort of their homes.
however, I strongly believe that this development of technology would diminish the essence of humanity. For instance, if an online delivery would not arrive on time at the customer's front door, they were easily annoyed to the extent that they shouted at the delivery boy. Moreover, a person became immensely impatient by not obtaining services instantly because they are living in a fast pace world where they would like accessibility in just a snap of seconds. Consequently, humanity and patience with others are slowly vanishing from each and every one.
In our village, where technology arises rapidly, it can be seen in my neighbourhood how they transform their life through the effect of phone usage. Way back before, they would patiently wait for the newspaper to be delivered, however, these days they tend to get angry once the news on their phone is not updated. As a result, they are easily irritated and impatient in public services.
To conclude, the flexibility of day-to-day household chores can be instantly finished by using the latest technology and other commodities can be acquired swiftly as well. however, I strongly believe that the usage of technology would slowly remove the essence of humanity and society is becoming more impatient once they can not get things in an instant.
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- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly services information tasks Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24050632911 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71735772535 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553797468354 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6877713287 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108122301106 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041530103547 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381161932136 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638592846892 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030902735585 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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