There are many environmental issues facing Vietnam. In your opinion what are the causes and effects of the biggest environmental issues that Vietnam must confront
Along with the development of society, there are so many issues around the world, especially in vietnam namely storm, flood, drought, air pollution,... The biggest problem of which is air pollution. this topic becomes hot on some vietnamese forums and discussed every day. My essay will provide some causes and effects of air pollution.
there are many causes of air pollution. Obviously, some manufacturing companies and industrial parks in vietnam freely release a large amount of toxic chemicals into the air without cleaning. Another cause is most of vietnamese people are likely to use private vehicles than public transport. many people think that they are convenient and comfortable. In addition, most families burn fossil fuels. For examples, coal and gases for cooking, is contributing to contamination of air. Moreover, fewer people deforest for farming, build house and factories.
From the above of causes, the huge consequence have emerged not only affecting the health of the people but also the whole society of vietnam. Firstly, the vietnamese people definitely suffer from serious health problem. there are so many people catch a disease related to respiratory. Currently, some people die because of air pollution. Nowadays, more and more natural disasters occur frequently. they destroy shelter and threaten to human life, especially, those who are living in the middle of vietnam.
It is a huge challenge for vietnamese goverment to deal with this problem.
To sum up, air pollution causes many consequences for human life. protecting the environment is not the responsibility of any single person, but for the whole vietnamese society. Therefore, let's protect the environment from the smallest things
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43656716418 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85120288208 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 283.868780488 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1958388781 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.380952381 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7619047619 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12737168633 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374732195971 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439045786253 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644056851841 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461808263376 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.3012195122 89% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.38 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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