In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in some others, the government pays for them. Do you think the advantages that the government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages?
Providing the cost of college tuition has been increasingly more prevalent. While people argue that parents must take responsibility for covering the tuition fee of their child, I am of the opinion that the government should pay for it.
On the one hand, the governmental policy of subsidizing full-ride scholarship is disadvantageous. A reason for this is that the budget would be less for other important sectors such as health care or environmental issues. Additionally, if education is free, some students may take it for granted. They wouldn't take studying seriously due to the fact that they don't have to pay.
On the other hand, the advantages of the government covering the tertiary education are more considerable than the drawbacks. On a national level, the students would appreciate if education is free. They might study hard to develop themselves in order to contribute to their countries. Particularly, they would be able to become an intellectual workforce. On an individual level, learners would be easily to graduate if there is free education. They will encourage themselves and be able to make ends meet and money won't be a problem anymore.
To conclude, although it is argued that governments don't have to provide the tuition fee, I firmly believe that the coverage of the full-ride scholarship is governments' responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24423963134 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15881726701 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.579639664 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222492282686 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663733033886 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666291254575 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1334667582 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053382092606 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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