International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?
Currently, the tourism industry is developing extremely strongly and international travel is becoming cheaper, many countries are also opening their doors to foreign tourists. And in my opinion, this tourism boom will have its advantages and disadvantages. But perhaps the advantages will prevail more.
First, it can be seen that tourism brings economic and cultural benefits to that country. For example, tourism will provide job opportunities for local people, they can work as tour guides, or work in hotels, restaurants, etc. Second, the development of tourism The calendar also helps to promote the images, culture and cuisine of a country to international friends. Visitors will experience those things and share with their relatives and friends to arouse their curiosity about that country.
Besides the positive sides, it also has its drawbacks. The development of international tourism will also affect the environment more or less. For example, a lot of tourists means more waste will be released into the environment, causing serious impacts on the living environment. Furthermore, local culture may be lost as historic sites will be replaced by high-rise hotel buildings.
In summary, there are also negative aspects to national tourism but it is insignificant compared to the advantages that tourism brings. Attracting more tourists will greatly benefit the economy of that country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, as to, for example, in summary, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54205607477 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92703954289 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61214953271 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0055169404 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2307692308 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297200061691 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107518612217 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802997104093 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199418092132 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113495439834 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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