It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, people are believed that risk-taking is a crucial factor to bring success in life and at works. From my perspectives, the benefits of this trend overshadow its disadvantage.
On the one hand, it is understandable why many people think that taking risk will have disadvantage. To many people, it is necessary to prepare a plan which will outline what they need to do, what they can face and what result they have. They are afraid that if they fail, they will be hurt. For example, before organizing a concert, singer need to prepare financial budget, organization places, list of songs and other things. If they don’t have enough money, their concert may be broken.
On the other hand, from my viewpoint, the advantages of taking risk outweigh the drawbacks. The first benefit is to bring more opportunities for people to gain success in life and at works. For example, workers can reach the excellent performance when they try somethings new for their works. Secondly, risk is a way to help people to advance one's skills and gaining experience. For example, businessman may fail when he is risky to implement a new project, he can develop his organization skill, management skill as well as negotiation skills.
In conclusion, risks are a vital factor to be successful in life and at works which has more advantages, than drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94713656388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84414375172 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7842339454 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3846153846 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196915039633 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791798900467 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778995063953 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114849373032 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047022179949 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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