People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the cause? What are the solution?
Many teachers assign homework to students every day. do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
people feel unsafe whenever they are in their house or the public. In this essay, I will discuss the reason why they feel that as well as give some solutions to allay those fears.
There are some causes for their feelings. Fistly, the gap between poor and rich. this a factor behind the rising crime rate. when the poor don't have jobs to earn for living, they steal from someone else's houses and rob in the public. example, in paris - the rich city in the world, people often was robbed bags and wallets. so people in area always feel unsafe when they go out or in their home. Secondly,the traffic awareness results to their fear the increasing of traffic jam is damage to people so they feel worried when they go out. people know what they do is dangerous to eveyone but they still do. example, the driver know that drinking wine can make acciddent but they still do that or running red light make you and everyone dangerous but you still do.
All of activities results from awareness so we need some solution to deal with them. government provide job training programs to help people out of poverty and into employment. when people get out of poverty, the crime rate reduce. Therefore, people feel safer and allay fears. they also install more camera especiall along major road to ensure motorist obey speed limit. Beside, government should enact laws to punish severely the drivers who making accident due to drinking wine or running out red light.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76325088339 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16498619972 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2920909249 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.15 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32668192938 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087392572667 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865107031215 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131764025769 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109423482595 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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