What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In my opinion, a house as a whole is a very sacred place to me. But, if I were to choose the most important room in a house, it would definitely be the bedroom. I will elaborate the rationale behind this opinion in the subsequent passage.
First of all, one doesn't spend much time in the house during the working days. This means that once we come back home from a long and tiring day, all we are looking forward is to have a peaceful sleep and rest time. A bedroom is a place where we spend our nights in. In my case, as soon as I reach home, I get freshened up , change into my comfortable clothes and jump right on to the bed. It doesn't really matter how the rest of my house looks and feels like at the point of time. I enter my bedroom and exit that the next morning. Hence, for me bedroom is the only place which should be the most comfortable to be in.
Secondly, there are people who live in 1BHK houses or small houses. They do not really care about how the house appeals to other people. In fact, they are the ones who are most invested in keeping their bedrooms clean and tidy as they have to spend most of their times in that one room. For anyone, a bedroom is the most important place the house. People are willing to adjust in other parts of their houses, but are not willing to opt for a small or uncomfortable bedroom. For instance, when I was a child, my parents were looking for a house. I used to go with them for house hunting. Upon visiting multiple houses, I realised that there are houses which had a garden in front of it or had a balcony, but my parents too preferred a house that had a bigger bedroom. As a child also, I spent my time after school in bedroom to either do my homework or invite my friends over to the house.
In conclusion, to me, a bedroom is a very important aspect in a house as compared to any other room.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...subsequent passage. First of all, one doesnt spend much time in the house during the...
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Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...soon as I reach home, I get freshened up , change into my comfortable clothes and ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...lothes and jump right on to the bed. It doesnt really matter how the rest of my house ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12154696133 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23102061105 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497237569061 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9130547294 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172984459805 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607001211597 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685757047357 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160258705174 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084866469007 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 10.9000537634 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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