A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets a lot of exercise and avoids stress.
What do people do to stay healthy in your country?
People in the past used to eat organic food and work hard in farms or etc, therefore they used to be fit but these days people just go to work and do their job by then and the day will be finished. Living in these days contains great deal stress which we have to tackle. As a matter of fact being healthy is generally combination of mind and body exercise due to staying fit and calm. It is important for people to pay attention to their health by their diet and exercise, so they can live longer and better.
In my country, there are many differences between life styles in different cities but mo...
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