The charts below show the average consumption of three nutrients by adults in the UK All of these nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write

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The charts below show the average consumption of three
nutrients by adults in the UK. All of these nutrients may be
unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the
main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write
at least 150 words.

The three pie charts give information about the proportion of sodium,
saturated fat, and added sugar in the typical meals of UK adults. Excessive
consumption of any of those nutrients is considered to negatively affect one’s
health.
The first two meals of the day, breakfast and lunch, appear to be quite
healthy with a relatively even distribution of nutrients. A typical breakfast is the
lightest meal of the day, which contains between 13 and 16 per cent of each
nutrient. For lunch, people consume between 20 and 28 per cent of the
nutrients, with added sugar being the lowest and sodium the highest.
On the other hand, dinner and snacks appear to be less balanced. Out of all
the meals, dinner contains the largest proportions of sodium and saturated fat
(42 and 39 per cent of daily intake, respectively). However, when snacking,
people eat the most added sugar (45 per cent), as well as slightly more
sodium and saturated fat than for breakfast.
Overall, the first two meals of the day eaten by adults in the UK are relatively
balanced and healthy, whereas dinner contains the most sodium and
saturated fat. Most of the added sugar is in snack foods.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5810075552 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0860083689 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946152748154 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417629830778 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341516322792 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0336013620324 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406529420922 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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