Some people think that developing countries should invite large foreign companies to open offices and factories in order to help foreign to boost their economy while others disagree , they say that government should help to local companies instead of inviting foreign companies to boost their economic growth. To what extent do u agree or disagree with both views.
In this rampant age of globalization, some people think that developing companies must invite foreign companies to offer job opportunities to unemployed people therefore, a massive number of people would get job which would help them to upgrade the quality of life. Opposite wind is also there. Here, I would like to incline in the favour of statement that invite foreign companies.
To set in, there are several points to support my view for about invite foreign companies. It will be lucrative idea to get jobs as well as boost up our economic level through taxes and sallery from foreign companies. Moreover, innovative equipments are being used by foreign companies it will enable the workers to gain new management skills and they can come to know about advance technology which is use by the overseas companies. Consequently, they could survibe in the world very easily because they have wide range of skills and knowledge about work.
Further emohasizing on my point of view for foreign companies, it will allow us to exchange our culture and stregthen our social bonds which would helps them to business dealing much better. Furthermore, it will offer vintage products such as clothes, cars, advanced feature electronic gadgets and so on. therefore, we can lead a wealthy life.
On the contrary, foreign companies badly influence our local companies which will damage the local business entirely and some people think that they adopt western culture. Consequently, our culture will an alarming rate due to emergence foreign companies.
In a nutshell, after doing a great deal of thought and deliberations of my point of views both companies must be equally supported by government for employment and improve economy.
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Sentence: Further emohasizing on my point of view for foreign companies, it will allow us to exchange our culture and stregthen our social bonds which would helps them to business dealing much better.
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Sentence: Moreover, innovative equipments are being used by foreign companies it will enable the workers to gain new management skills and they can come to know about advance technology which is use by the overseas companies.Consequently, they could survibe in the world very easily because they have wide range of skills and knowledge about work.
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Sentence: Further emohasizing on my point of view for foreign companies, it will allow us to exchange our culture and stregthen our social bonds which would helps them to business dealing much better.
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