Many people find it hard to balance their
work with other parts of their lives.
What are the reasons for this?
How this problem can be overcome?
In this contemporary era, life balancing has become a hot topic of debate. Some People Concur that it is arduous to make life balance share and provide other daily activities. This essay looks at some of the Problems caused by hardworking on an individual's life and suggests some Solutions to the problems.
Adequate evidence is obtainable and substantiates the concept of making a balanced life has now become tough. The top-notch Concrete reason is that working more as Compared to the Past because people want to earn more to upgrade the living standard that they worked on over time, which directly impacts individuals' other physical activities. Another infamy root is that individuals are now addicted to technology such as Social media and gaming. In other words, People cannot Provide the proper time for other activities like trips and outings to restaurants. To hold my notion, I would quote an example From the USA. A survey showed that there are more than 65% of employees worked long hours and cannot consider other important
life events. consequently, such approaches are likely to make exemplary differences in individual some other important activities.
On the other hand, there are colossal ways and means that can be taken to combat this problem but the most Preforderant one is education. People need to be aware of these effects so they can avoid the long working Period. Furthermore, the Government Could also take a step to make laws on working hours So that we can minimize the challenges of anxiety and depression Problems
To recapitulate, people can be made to balance life if the above measures are taken. Although the problem is unlikely to be entirely eliminated in the short term there are concrete steps to reduce the effects it is having on the current society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r daily activities. This essay looks at some of the Problems caused by hardworking on an in...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...he Problems caused by hardworking on an individuals life and suggests some Solutions to the...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ch Concrete reason is that working more as Compared to the Past because people wan...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd gaming. In other words, People cannot Provide the proper time for other activi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
... consider other important life events. consequently, such approaches are likely to make exe...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e life if the above measures are taken. Although the problem is unlikely to be entirely ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03010033445 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70201825946 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9409421962 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253835379072 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813506058562 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053352195702 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128662120284 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576442202584 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.