Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change are increasing nowadays the government have taken some measure at a global level but they only get some solution. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?
Saving the enviroment has become the top priority all over the world. No country in the world disagrees with the fact that the Earth is at the brink of a climate change, but the measures taken neither have legs nor the lengths to address the issue. this essay shall analyse why this is happening, and also suggest some measures to mitigate the problem.
The first reason why global solutions have fallen short of the mark is that humans are shying away from the harm to the enviroment in the clonial industrial revolution times. Hence man have not done the preservation of the enviroment in a voluntary way. if we want to see a real positive change, everyone must do more than now. The world had been destroyed for hundreds of year, so we have to restore the world with persistence. Not everyone understands the magnitude of the problem, that is clear, so the governments and media should spread widely throughout nations.
The second major reason of not being able to do for the environment is people’s habits. For example, mans used up to 10 million plastic bags everyday, 100 million plastic bottles per month and 70 percent that go unrecycled. Remember that just 1 plastic bag or 1 plastic bottle can kill a fish or a totoise.Finally, powerful lobbies and corporations has influence on our government like the fossil fuel industries. if clean energy succeds, these giants would be lose. The solution for this would be to create awareness that fossil fuel industries have to step down to let the greener energies succeed.
To sum up, environmental protection is a practice of protecting the natural environment on individual, organizational or governmental levels, for the benefit of both the environment and humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 291.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8384297274 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 106.607317073 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2356982852 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205870932313 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592687768535 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609139399493 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105174131765 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690885714918 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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