Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Most of developed nations are replacing the fossil fuels with the hydro, and green energy as a alternate options, since last decade, petrol, diesel, CNG, Liquid Petroleum Gas, and CNG are the main source of energy using by almost all countries citizens. These types of positive developments are extremely beneficial for everyone, also I am in favor to use wind, water, hydro energy to produces energy, because every country have limited resources of traditional energy.
Furthermore, due to huge growth of population in all countries, people are consuming more energy to livelihood, owing to this,
they are using natural energy options, such as petrol, diesel, CNG, LPG to fulfill their daily tasks. To cite an example, in India, large number of individuals are using LPG to cook the food, and another types of fossil fuels are used by humans for their vehicles to reach from one location to other location. Consequently, all the countries natural resources are getting shorts, owing to this, they have to import fossil fuels from another nation, which create negative impacts on their economy as well as those countries are 100% dependent on exporter country.
To overcome such issue, all countries are focusing on another alternative options, to illustrate, since last 2 decades India is emphasizing to use wind, solar, hydro energy as main option.
In contrast, still most of developing countries are dependent of fossil fuels, because they did not enhance as well as modify their rules, and regulations to support the alternative energy options. To exemplify, according to the last week Hindustan Times newspaper, Bhutan is still using fossil fuels as a main source of energy, even Bhutan Prime Minister stated that they will try to use green energy options in next decades.
In conclusion, although, fossil fuel energy options are easy to obtain, but traditional resources have limited stock, also these types of energy options creating pollution, which is very hazardous for everyone, owing this every year global temperature is getting rise up to 2 degree Celsius. I personally believe that if we use solar, wind, water energy as a alternative option, it would be very beneficial for environment, addition to this, all countries government should insist their citizens to use green energy.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...els with the hydro, and green energy as a alternate options, since last decade, p...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore energy to livelihood, owing to this, they are using natural energy options, s...
^^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e they did not enhance as well as modify their rules, and regulations to support...
^^
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as modify their rules, and regulations to support the alternative energy option...
^^
Line 9, column 358, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... if we use solar, wind, water energy as a alternative option, it would be very be...
^
Line 9, column 447, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... for environment, addition to this, all countries government should insist their citizens...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24594594595 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64809839844 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.6986062379 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 194.1 106.682146367 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402562131412 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171333327589 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071380968056 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209649991926 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871213018243 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...els with the hydro, and green energy as a alternate options, since last decade, p...
^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore energy to livelihood, owing to this, they are using natural energy options, s...
^^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e they did not enhance as well as modify their rules, and regulations to support...
^^
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as modify their rules, and regulations to support the alternative energy option...
^^
Line 9, column 358, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... if we use solar, wind, water energy as a alternative option, it would be very be...
^
Line 9, column 447, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... for environment, addition to this, all countries government should insist their citizens...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24594594595 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64809839844 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.6986062379 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 194.1 106.682146367 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402562131412 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171333327589 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071380968056 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209649991926 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871213018243 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.