Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. What do you think that is the case?. What is, in your opinion, the most important thing to succeed in life?
Many people failing in school are succeed in life, result in plenty of reasons. Perhaps, in school has lots of theorities, which are not useful in practical matter. However, in real life many individuals could extremely show their strengths, gain knowledges in fields. People are flexible to do more and more works, that are suitable for their abilities. Like Bill Gates, the person who dropped out university but become successful, wealthy, and adequate because of his efforts, creative mindset, sharpening skills. On the other hand, they may hidden talents. They are capable of singing, critical thinking, presenting,.. which are not recognized in school. Therefore, people cannot demonstrate in the best ways to show abilities.
In my opinion, the essential thing for success is having determination. A determined mind plays important roles, it is the key to become self-confidence, independent, dare to face to challenges, learning to from mistakes. From this point, people can build healthy connections to each others, achieve their goals
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
Many people failing in school are succeed in life, result in plenty of reasons. P...
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Line 1, column 545, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'hide' or 'be hidden'?
Suggestion: hide; be hidden
...ing skills. On the other hand, they may hidden talents. They are capable of singing, c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...f singing, critical thinking, presenting,.. which are not recognized in school. Th...
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Line 1, column 620, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... singing, critical thinking, presenting,.. which are not recognized in school. The...
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Line 1, column 623, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...nging, critical thinking, presenting,.. which are not recognized in school. Therefore...
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Line 1, column 623, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nging, critical thinking, presenting,.. which are not recognized in school. Therefore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45061728395 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95008130883 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6988756437 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5833333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170880561978 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569123771222 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676381955265 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114885910009 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285531630302 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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