It is very important that children should study hard at school. Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted. Do you agree or disagree?
IIn this mordern world , the internet becomes the mosst essential tool for lives , especially, it benefits our future education enormously . Therefore, I totally dissagree wwith the statement that time spent studying on the internet is time waste.
First of all , it can't be denied that studying on the internet is effecient and interactive . The internet provides students with a wide range of online resources . it helps us review old lesson and offers us extra-knowledge. Futhermore, internet is also a powerful tool in education. this tool will be able to make our lessons more graphic. it is one way of supporting students ' study and helping them be relax during the lessons . From that, students study without stress and pay more attention in classes.
secondly, studying online sets up self-studying skills. with high techonology, internet becomes abundant sources of information with students. this source is not limited as the knowledge at school . it assists students with updating knowledge . In addition, it is so flexible that students can studying everytime and everywhere. They can choose some online courses which are suitable for their free time. Not only that, these days, there are many apps designed with a view to improving students' self-studying . Since studying by apps and videos are more attractive, children can study harder and better.
All things considered , studying on the internet provides us so many benefits . Moreover, students had better combine studying hard at school and self-studying online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39495798319 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90162988681 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4715270751 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5789473684 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5263157895 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 1.69756097561 1473% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292371115437 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917598624805 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828276471275 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196571336155 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546991546491 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.09 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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