In many countries, people like to eat a wider range of food than can be grown in their local place. Therefore, much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?
It is true that numerous people enjoy eating a variety of food coming from different regions. From my perspective, the benefits of this development are outweighed by its drawbacks.
On the one hand, the option is advantageous to some extent. The main benefit is that people have access to a greater variety of food, leading to a more diverse and interesting culinary experience than they would have if they were limited to only locally grown produce. In addition, importing food from other regions may provide various nutrients and vitamins that are not available in their local area. Furthermore, the import and export of food can create new business opportunities and help to grow the economy. For example, Da Lat has many kinds of dried fruits, especially dried persimmons, a local specialty that only Da Lat has; therefore, local authorities take advantage and promote planned and large-scale production for export to major markets such as the UK and the US, which may earn foreign exchange.
On the other hand, I believe that despite such advantages, disadvantages are more significant. Firstly, as food has to be transported over long distances, this has a negative impact on greenhouse gas emissions as it creates a significant carbon footprint. Second, nations that rely significantly on imported food may be more susceptible to supply interruptions brought on by environmental, political, or economic issues. For example, in 2011, a major earthquake and tsunami in Japan disrupted the country's supply chain, leading to shortages of food and other essential goods. Finally, if people rely heavily on imported food, they may lose their connection to their local food culture and traditional cuisine, which can be a loss to their cultural identity.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the disadvantages of this development are more significant than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02246404261 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8217883725 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342558001899 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110794877877 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614290782022 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198625553045 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553919517885 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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