Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools Other however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Other, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

A plenty of people opine that it is preferable to teach male and female teenagers in different institutions while the others support that the co-educational system is much beneficial for them. In my point of view, it will be better to send boys and girls to the same institute.
First of all, the majority of people who agree single-sex education are also the parents. parents think that it will enhance their children independent life. Moreover, the kids easily focus more on their studies. And those are one of the most reasons making parents engage their children in separate schools.
On the other hand, learning in co-educational system helps teenagers to grow socially and professionally. The fact that people study in mixed-gender schools get to know another gender as well as the same gender. also, both female and male children will gain essential skills, thus it helps them to have more opportunities in being elected a gender-equal multinational organization. For instance, it is an upward trend of global cooperation that both of two genders easily collaborate if their children used to learn in unisexual environment.
To sum up, educating in single-sex institutions or in cases coeducation both have there own positive sides. However, i still stand in coeducation system.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20673076923 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01367921137 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7958489915 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172093437775 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544430468207 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382529805417 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928036105102 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332283445557 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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