Introducing about your university’s facilities
I believe that having a good facility at the school and work place will help us a lot in improving the efficiency of studying and working. especially in an environment that promotes academic qualifications such as Foreign Trade University, it is even more important. As a school with a long history, some of the classrooms in Building B have become old. However, last year the school renovated the 5th floor and this year the 1st and 2nd floor. The classrooms have been fully equipped with projectors, tables, tables and chairs have been renovated and the space has also become more modern and spacious. Currently, the school is renovating to expand the self-study space for students, because previously the school only had a separate self-study room. Computer labs with good computer systems and large numbers are convenient for students' learning and research. Although there has been a great improvement in equipment and classrooms, the school's wifi system is still unstable, sometimes losing connection. The school's canteen is also quite diverse in food and drinks, but it is not popular with many students. Hopefully, the facilities of the Foreign Trade School will be improved more and more to help students improve their learning performance further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
...the efficiency of studying and working. especially in an environment that promotes academi...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rtant. As a school with a long history, some of the classrooms in Building B have become ol...
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Line 1, column 1012, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...table, sometimes losing connection. The schools canteen is also quite diverse in food a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1921182266 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79294271525 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4787663088 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0273995415251 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0113225327968 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227138333604 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0273995415251 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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