The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given four different pie charts compare several age groups of people who were living in Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050.
Overall, it can be deemed that the group of 60 and over years old decreased by 3.6% in 2000 and 5.7% in 2050 in Yemen while they increased in Italy by 24.1% and 42.03% in 2000 and 2050 respectively.
First of all, the individuals of 0 to 14 years old were 50.1% in 2000 in Yemen while the number will drop by 37.0% in 2050. Moreover, the second team from 15 to 69 years were no more than 46.3% in 2000 when they will climb up in with the majority of percentage which will 57.03 percent in 2050. In addition, the population who were 50 and more had a tiny portion which was 3.6% in 2000 which will rise slightly by 5.7% in 2050. However, the people of O to l4 years age group were 14.3% in 2000 whereas they will decrease by 11.5% in 2050 in Italy. Furthermore, 15 to 59 years old population increased rapidly by 61.6% in 2000 when the proportion will downfall by 46.2% in 2050. Therefore, no more than 24.1%, 60 and over older individuals were in 2000 which will improve with double by 42-3%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31924882629 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2519752131 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2304976084 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 5.23603664747 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156032138634 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878239535661 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443130132644 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137928364636 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267649148661 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.39 61.2550243902 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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