Nowadays a growing umber of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their actual doctor. Do yo think this is a positive or negative development?
In the modern world, people are seeking novel methods of treatments than using prescribed medicine. This trend can be reviewed from both positive and negative angles depending on the type of illness and the alternatives applied for it. Below I briefly discuss both views.
On the one hand, moving towards natural and less chemical ways of treatment is a development. Taking even the most common drugs regularly, have their own side effects and many see this as a disadvantage that doesn’t worth trying when it comes to more common and non-serious health issues such as headaches or depression. Nowadays, progressive health advisors recommend patients to engage in physical activities such as Pilates, Yoga, and/or traditional treatments such as acupuncture to address those issues. In my opinion, those alternatives, not only are harmless, but also offer plenty of benefits to mental and physical health.
On the other hand, this trend can be extremely dangerous for patients with more serious health complications such as blood pressure and heart-related diseases. In many parts of the world, especially older generations find it more difficult to trust the medicines they are given. This is mostly cultural since their great parents used to cure themselves using merely herbal and home-made potions. However, they have neglected the fact that their ancestors had a significantly shorter life span probably due to the lack of adequate drugs. Moreover, the lifestyles have changed, with the current amount of food additives and the high consumption of fast food coupled with a more sedentary lifestyle, it is hard to believe that non-medical approaches would be actually effective, if not harmful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun see seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sees'.
Suggestion: many sees
...ularly, have their own side effects and many see this as a disadvantage that doesn’t wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, but, however, if, moreover, so, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35820895522 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84406695833 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667910447761 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4681070972 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174964531181 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516301099712 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291206704731 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108405369424 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00894935685039 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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