A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague.
In your letter, you should say:
• what the presentation was about,
• why the presentation was important
• how the book helped you.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to thank you profoundly because the book “marketing gaint” which you had given me, has assisted me a lot during presentation at my office.
well, you might be knowing that, I had to attend one presentation for upcoming marketing stretegy of company. So, I was the one who had to give some an extra-ordinary ideas for new marketing plan.
Moreover, this presentation was quite crucial because some other country’s CEO, CFO, and marketing head was also attending this presentation.So, it was decided that If they will like my idea then I will be promoted and will have 7 days free International holidays with family on compny’s expence.
Luckily, I had your book, in this book there were multifarious ideas which were quite unique and has experimental proof. That is why I presented with full of confidence and finished with out of the box ideas. Which not only liked by CEOs but also by CFOs. And I got all the benefit which they had decided.
Will meet you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-12-21 | Rehana Diwan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Well
... lot during presentation at my office. well, you might be knowing that, I had to at...
^^^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...entation at my office. well, you might be knowing that, I had to attend one presentation ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ad was also attending this presentation.So, it was decided that If they will like ...
^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ed with full of confidence and finished with out of the box ideas. Which not only liked ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85555555556 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84624508978 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6981961473 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1111111111 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296179435057 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115838758831 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604040757183 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158392752369 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645118393547 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.