Consumer behavior has changed considerably in recent years due to technology.
In what ways does technology affect consumer activities such as shopping?
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is apparent that the customer bias has been transformed remarkably over the recent years by technological advancements. Especially, shopping business has changed to a traditional method to take place on the internet thanks to technology. In my point of view, it's advantages of transition overshadow many drawbacks.
The primary cause of changes is that the customer starts to pick up products on online shopping instead of the traditional market. Nowadays, almost all individuals are using smartphones to engage on social media. Shopping stores show all of their products on platforms such as: Tiktok, Facebook, Instagram, … make it easy for customers to find products for their needs instead of previous ways. For example, with Shoppee application, the consumer can access quickly to purchase goods but not spending too much time or transportation to get to the shops. Furthermore, customers have also searched with a variety of product sources , comparing the price and the shop evaluation on this platform.
The most prominent technology development to customer orientation is approachable and does not take too much effort for activities. In the past, buyers had to go to stores or markets to opt for their goods, currently, they just use smartphone connected internet to order their products.In addition, It saves time and effort for customers to adapt with their expectations. Take the pick up process, for example, customers have to ride vehicles to purchase their goods, and transport to many places to be able to find suitable goods. But if they order those products on the internet, they just need a device with a touch one.
In a nutshell, It is true that the customer approach has rectified significantly thanks to technological inventions, especially the transition from traditional ways to online shopping business. However, I firmly believe that the advantages of this change overweighs many disadvantages by easily approaching easier and less effort.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... goods but not spending too much time or transportation to get to the shops. Furt...
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Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...arched with a variety of product sources , comparing the price and the shop evalua...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...nected internet to order their products.In addition, It saves time and effort for ...
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Line 4, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... But if they order those products on the internet, they just need a device with a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36012861736 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06282661718 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1875950632 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13547612238 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501526349296 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429351626575 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974934259611 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050108484533 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... goods but not spending too much time or transportation to get to the shops. Furt...
^^
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...arched with a variety of product sources , comparing the price and the shop evalua...
^^
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...nected internet to order their products.In addition, It saves time and effort for ...
^^
Line 4, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... But if they order those products on the internet, they just need a device with a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36012861736 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06282661718 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1875950632 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13547612238 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501526349296 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429351626575 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974934259611 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050108484533 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.