Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air.
What are these problems and how might they be reduced?
Not only are we doing innovations and development, but the earth is also suffering from its serious outcomes. Countries undergoing environmental issues; what are the reasons and how it can be solved?In this essay, I will examine some of the reasons and the proactive measure that can be taken to eradicate this problem.
There are several reasons, but the key reason is industrialization. As people are constructing factories that causes non- degradable air, land and water pollution through the waste that emits out of the factories. Notwithstanding the pollution controlling measures imposed, the factories prefers polluting the earth. This can be resolved, if government should appoint specific team to inspect all factories every four months. In addition, they can impose a heavy fine for not following the rules.
Another reason of countries getting pollutes is the use of plastic. Since, it is evident that plastic is non-biodegradable and it stays in soil and water for decades; therefore, it is a significant threat to a clean environment. One of the ways to have a hold on this issue is by banning the use of plastic and replacing it with a paper or glass. Moreover, government should invest in the scientific discovery of a substance that is biodegradable and firm enough to replace plastic containers.
Summing up, the pertinent points mentioned above are some of the reasons and solutions to the problem of pollution. Banning plastic and implementing inspections for factories are the only solutions to save our land, water and air from contaminants. Hence, if humans wants to live happily and healthily then it is must to eradicate this problem from this world.
- The graph below campares figures for production and consumptiin of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It also predicts the figures of 2025. 78
- The given diagram shows the process of making water clock. 73
- The maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 56
- Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace e g at home when travelling etc Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...and how it can be solved?In this essay, I will examine some of the reasons and th...
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Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...o live happily and healthily then it is must to eradicate this problem from this world....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19117647059 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09536990986 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5627366372 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18143044504 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535955224353 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377979700227 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102029780647 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246411063187 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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