A large supermarket chain is asking for permission to open a supermarket in your area.
Your local councillor wants to find out local opinion on this.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention about a serious issue which makes us feel disenchanted and disillusioned. It is known among people that a new supermarket chain has already decided to construct a streamlined supermarket in our area. Although this decision initially caused a great inconvenience, there are some benefits in terms of lower prices and more opportunity for habitants to find a well-paid job. It sounds like a cliché but it is unique in the sense of convenience.
It is an undeniable that some people do not concur with this advanced supermarket. They state that this new supermarket will make our small and specialist shops suffer from lack of incomes as well as our local economy will not receive enough revenue. Another considerable problem is that traffic congestion will increased in our area which is very bad for our health and environment.
Therefore, we have already decided to express our opinions on this. We would deeply appreciate if you could give us a prompt reply at your most convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Emin
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Another considerable problem is that traffic congestion will increased
Another considerable problem is that traffic congestion will be increased
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