The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant(Mixed charts).
The line graph gives information about the average temperature everyday and the bar chart illustrates how many days with rainfall each day in Brisbane and Canberra.
What stands out from the line graph is that daily maximum and minimum temperature in two Australian cities both have a period of stability, while the number of maximum degrees celsius in Brisbane is always the highest, the minimum temperature in Canberra is all-time low. It can be considered in the barchart that the number of days with rainfall in Canberra is fewer than those number in Brisbane.
Beginning at the highest point in Jan with 28 degrees celsius is the maximum temperatures in Brisbane these temperatures have the strongest fluctuation. These figures reach a peak of 30 degrees celsius in Feb then decrease by 10 degrees celsius in Apr and oscillate significantly before stay beyound the others at about degrees celsius. Followed by the average maximum temperature in Canberra and the lowest temperature in Brisbane ranking the 2nd and 3rd figures witness a fluctuate around 26 degrees celsius in Canberra- maximum and from 21 to 19 degrees celsius in Brisband- minimum each month. Besides it experience that the minimum temperature in Canberra starts at the half of Brisbane- maximum and its all time low of around 13 degrees celsius at the end of the a decade.
On the other hand, the highest number of days with rainfall more than 10 are in March and Feb, the highest figures occurs in March at 14 days with rainfall in Brisbane per month and the number of days with rainfall from Jun to Aug and Oct at 10 days in Canberra. Besides, the number of days with rainfall fewer than 10 days has experience more in Canberra, remaining months of the years have around 7 rainy days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...formation about the average temperature everyday and the bar chart illustrates how many ...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture in Brisbane ranking the 2nd and 3rd figures witness a fluctuate around 26 de...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 19 degrees celsius in Brisband- minimum each month. Besides it experience that t...
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Line 3, column 767, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...around 13 degrees celsius at the end of the a decade. On the other hand, the highest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 33.7804878049 181% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86046511628 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64116049204 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451827242525 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4997354491 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.555555556 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404094435643 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184241084565 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786441670698 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265809208282 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612984269592 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.