An informal letter sending my friends to inform about my studying at university

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An informal letter sending my friends to inform about my studying at university

Dear Mai Anh

How are you?I hope you and your family are doing well.

I am writing to let you know about my studying at university.
As you know well, I am a freshman at CTU and my major is electrical engineering(high-quality). At the first semester, all subject that I have been taught is relevant to English completely. Thank to my quite good English foundation, I catched up with instructor's teaching speed and content's studying program and understand the lesson that the instructor taught. But I still met some difficulties in studying and I was confused with difficult assignments. Moreover, I felt so nervous when I couldn't find a good solutions to improve my English skills. I don't know what I should study and practice to become better at English and really true studying methods. I scare that I would make mistake and couldn't enhanced my English, so I created pressure for me myself. This made me so tired. But now, I felt more calm and comfortable because I understand that studying is process that need much time to become fluent and I must be try hard, make effort and practice studying English gradually and usually everyday to become better at English. Maybe I was overthinking, but now my spirit was enhanced positively. Now, I will stay calm to think about the ways to learn English clearly and truely. And I will make plan to study English detaily and carefully to avoid confusion and nervousness. I need to be harder and I usually must practice using English every single day. That's all about my studying at the first semester at CTU. I expect to see your response and I also wanted to know about your studying at university. Can you tell me about this?Looking forward to see you soom if we have opportunities to tell you more about my life and I am also curious about yourself more. Can't wait to meet you. Keep fit my lover!

Take care,
Gia Bao

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Mai Anh How are you?I hope you and your family are doing well...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
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... you and your family are doing well. I am writing to let you know about my stu...
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Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ying at university. As you know well, I am a freshman at CTU and my major is el...
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Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
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...At the first semester, all subject that I have been taught is relevant to English...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...nk to my quite good English foundation, I catched up with instructors teaching sp...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
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... lesson that the instructor taught. But I still met some difficulties in studying...
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...l met some difficulties in studying and I was confused with difficult assignments...
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...d with difficult assignments. Moreover, I felt so nervous when I couldnt find a g...
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...ments. Moreover, I felt so nervous when I couldnt find a good solutions to improv...
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...solutions to improve my English skills. I dont know what I should study and pract...
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Suggestion: I
...ove my English skills. I dont know what I should study and practice to become bet...
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...glish and really true studying methods. I scare that I would make mistake and cou...
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...lly true studying methods. I scare that I would make mistake and couldnt enhanced...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
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...ake and couldnt enhanced my English, so I created pressure for me myself. This ma...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...myself. This made me so tired. But now, I felt more calm and comfortable because ...
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Line 6, column 833, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... felt more calm and comfortable because I understand that studying is process tha...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...hat need much time to become fluent and I must be try hard, make effort and pract...
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Line 6, column 996, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... studying English gradually and usually everyday to become better at English. Maybe I wa...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...yday to become better at English. Maybe I was overthinking, but now my spirit was...
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Line 6, column 1108, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...my spirit was enhanced positively. Now, I will stay calm to think about the ways ...
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Line 6, column 1190, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...o learn English clearly and truely. And I will make plan to study English detaily...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...lly to avoid confusion and nervousness. I need to be harder and I usually must pr...
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Line 6, column 1306, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...nd nervousness. I need to be harder and I usually must practice using English eve...
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Line 6, column 1420, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... studying at the first semester at CTU. I expect to see your response and I also ...
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Suggestion: I
... CTU. I expect to see your response and I also wanted to know about your studying...
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Suggestion: I
...ties to tell you more about my life and I am also curious about yourself more. Ca...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
... I am also curious about yourself more. Cant wait to meet you. Keep fit my lover! ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Cant) must be used with a third-person verb: 'waits'.
Suggestion: waits
... also curious about yourself more. Cant wait to meet you. Keep fit my lover! Take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66163141994 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82976278754 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537764350453 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8329371569 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.15 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243557576938 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828578039851 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074968003722 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162931649054 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115390027932 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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