The private motor vehicle has given us states symbol. Yet the use of it has created serious problems on the road. How can the use of private motor vehicles be reduced?
In our society having a private vehicle shows the status of person. People save-up their money to get own vehicle and some of them forget their essential needs and give priority for the vehicle. The increasing number of private traffic causes many problems not only on the road but also in the whole society.
when we consider of the road, huge traffic blocks have created problems in almost all over the world. People wast their valuable hours and hours in the traffic -jam which can actively contribute to the growth of world economy...
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Sentence: People save-up their money to get own vehicle and some of them forget their essential needs and give priority for the vehicle.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to People and save-up
if he use his own vehicle
if he uses his own vehicle
If each country try to less the amount of private traffic
If each country tries to less the amount of private traffic
Sentence: China is a country ell known for their huge population, and it has 16 of 20 most polluted cities.
Error: ell Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
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No. of Words: 330 350
No. of Characters: 1593 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.262 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.827 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.622 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.707 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
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