You recently travelled on a train which arrived very late causing you to miss an appointment.
Write a letter to the train company. In your letter
-Explain what caused the delay in the journey
-Tell them what happened because of the delay
-Ask them for a refund.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to my recent train travel from Leeds to Manchester on 29th May 2014. Schedule time for the train arrival was 9:25am and train arrived at 12:30pm.
When I enquired at customer service of the Leeds train station, they said this delay is because of the uncertain rainfall in Yorkshire. Customer service department said this was uncertain and it was not in their control. I explained them 30min – 1hour delay is acceptable but train got delayed by 3hrs 15 mins, which is not acceptable at all. I was trying to explain them, that I had an appointme...
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