Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your posit.
Business may be defined as an organization or enterprising entity engaged in commercial, industrial or professional activities. A business can be a for-profit entity, such as a publicly-traded corporation, or a non-profit organization engaged in business activities, such as an agricultural cooperative. Businesses include everything from a small owner-operated company such as a family restaurant, to a multinational conglomerate such as General Electric.Taking into account small businesses in particular, we can assert that there are many difficulties arising against them to take a safe ground ...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 33 15
No. of Words: 603 350
No. of Characters: 3146 1500
No. of Different Words: 296 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.955 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.217 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.065 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 238 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 190 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 129 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 97 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.273 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.866 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.606 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.246 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.421 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5