Some people believe that national sport teams and individual men and women who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should be funded by non-government ways (such as business, scholarship). What is your opinion?
As a result of constant mass media attention, athletes have become the center topic of the general in recent years. This leads to the phenomenon of heated debates on the issue of who should support them financially. Some people are of the opinion that government has the responsibilities, while others are opposed to this argument, insisting on the donation from non-government organizations. Personally, I agree with the latter.
Admittedly, as part of the national affairs, sports and sports professionals are the responsibilities of the government. To be specific, government has the duties, ap...
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Sentence: Although it is part of the government's duty, it could never overweigh the importance of solving poverty as well as well as fighting crime.
Error: overweigh Suggestion: overweight
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