Nowadays children have too much freedom, some people say. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.
These days different groups clamour for their rights and the children group have not been left out, with children seeking to be free to air their opinion or do whatever they choose to do. These has led some people to argue that the present day child have excessive freedom. From my own perspective, I think such privilege is for the betterment of children.
Most people from the older generation believe that today's children have been given too much liberty. Such opinion stems from making comparism between their own time, as children, and now. It has been argued that the child does not know ex...
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The following words were spelt in British English.
Clamour
Realise
Realised
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These has led some people
This has led some people
child have excessive freedom
children have excessive freedom
ends up making wrong choices
it ends up making wrong choices
child have too much freedom
children have too much freedom
the society have evolved
the society has evolved
sort on matters that concerns him
sort on matters that concern him
Sentence: These days different groups clamour for their rights and the children group have not been left out, with children seeking to be free to air their opinion or do whatever they choose to do.
Error: clamour Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Such opinion stems from making comparism between their own time, as children, and now.
Error: comparism Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For example, a child at liberty to choose what to wear on a daily basis can choose to put on light clothing on a cold day, just because he likes the particular oufit.
Error: oufit Suggestion: out
Sentence: Without realising that as the day progresses, the weather will get colder and so he ends up catching a cold.
Error: realising Suggestion: realizing
Sentence: However, people who believe that the present day child have too much freedom fail to realise that the society have evolved and every child is an individual.
Error: realise Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Additionally, when children are allowed to take a decision and bear the cosequences of the decision made.
Error: cosequences Suggestion: consequences
Sentence: When I then needed money for something of importance, I realised the foolishness of not saving as I did not have enough cash and my father will not help me out.
Error: realised Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 361 350
No. of Characters: 1623 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.359 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.496 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.35 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.7 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5