The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and lesure activities that boys participates in, whereas the second graph shows the activities which girls participate.
The pie charts precisely give information about the findings of a survey of children's activity, in the first chart we can see the cultural and spare time activities among the boys, in the same way, the second one marked the activitieas which girls take part in. All the figures were estimated in percentages. According to the graph, it can be clearly seen that, among both of these genders, listening to music is the same point (10%).
To begin with boys activities, the biggest portion 34% belongs to computer games. It can be witnessed that. soccer is as twice low as it. Similarly,boys ar...
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listening to music is the same point
listening to music has the same point
soccer is as twice low as it
soccer is half of it
Sentence: To begin with boys activities, the biggest portion 34 belongs to computer games.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to boys and activities
Sentence: In terms of girls activities, it can be noticed that, the most interesting hobby among the girls is dancing by 27.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to girls and activities
Sentence: The pie charts precisely give information about the findings of a survey of children's activity, in the first chart we can see the cultural and spare time activities among the boys, in the same way, the second one marked the activitieas which girls take part in.
Error: activitieas Suggestion: activities
Sentence: The numbers showed the lowest indicater 2 in reading.
Error: indicater Suggestion: indicated
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.02 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 225 200
No. of Characters: 1068 1000
No. of Different Words: 127 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.747 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.692 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.029 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.02 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4