Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Prominence is considered to have all-embracing influence on multiple of issues which are connected with human behavior. Some people believe that things people are keen on are directly linked to people’s attitude in estimating whether it is conspicuous or not. In this essay, I am going to discuss why there is a reality in that behavior and reasons why people’s may alter in due course.
It is undeniable fact that some people are not always passionate about what is popular. In other words, popularity is taken as a major prerequisite for their desire. Therefore, those people tend to entertai...
- Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public heath, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products.Do you agree or disagree? 85
- A great amount of waste is becoming a social concern. What can individuals and governments do to reduce waste? Suggest possible solutions? 93
- In many countries children are engaged in some paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibility What are your opinions on this 47
- Failure is proof that the desire wasn t enough To what extend do you agree or disagree 73
- Young people who are still at school often feel just as much stress as working adults What are some of the causes of this stress and how does it affect individual students 73
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