Should a city to preserve its old historic building or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings.Use specific reasons and example to support your opinion.
Buildings are supposed to be express feeling and thinking of human being.Presently,old buildings represents the historical culture of past.By contrast,modern building depicts the stage of development of any city.Here,i would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up former view.First and foremost,history are also called knowledge bank,It enables to get great deal of information from historical buildings.For example,It helps to learn basic fundamental basics of architectural method and sculptural design.As a result,It gives priceless knowledge to us and may useful for our next generation.In addition to it,It plays a phenomenal role to attracts tourists in our country.Therefore,it makes easier to earn money for people.Thus,It contributes remarkably to boost our nation economy.
Numerous points can be mentioned to support latter view.Initially,constructing new modern buildings is symbol of status.for instance,America builds skyscrapers to show high attitude and power.As a result,Modern buildings represents our thinking to the next generation.Adding more,Modern building more spacious,splendid facilities and decorated magnificently.Therefore,They are more beautiful and well planned and hence,It is better way of utilization space.
From my notion,both aspects have their own significance.Although old buildings are the ornaments of any country,Modern buildings are the symbol of status and uplifts the standard.Government should preserve old building with renovating it repeatedly and constructing new buildings according to demand.
To recapitulate,Buildings are the basic need of our human being.It has been constructed or eliminating with timely.We should preserve precious old buildings and build new buildings according to its need.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2014-08-05 | swarn jaspal | 45 | view |
- Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
- Should a city to preserve its old historic building or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings.Use specific reasons and example to support your opinion. 45
- Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties birthday parties and other celebration is just a waste of money Others however think that these are necessary for individuals and society discuss both views and give your opinion 55
- some people say the government should not put money into building theaters and sports stadiums. they should spend money on medical care and education.To what extent do you agree or disagree with dis opinion. 80
Buildings are supposed to be express feeling and thinking of human being
Buildings are supposed to be the express feeling and thinking of human beings
old buildings represents the historical culture
old buildings represent the historical culture
history are also called knowledge bank
history is also called knowledge bank
and may useful for our next generation
and may be useful for our next generation
Modern buildings represents our thinking
Modern buildings represent our thinking
Modern building more spacious,splendid facilities
Modern buildings are more spacious with splendid facilities
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
Read a good grammar book.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 285 350
No. of Characters: 1510 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.109 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.298 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.905 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 47.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.991 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.483 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.874 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.17 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5