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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?
It has generally been observed that children are increasingly using computer every day. As the statement indicates, I also believe that using computer daily by children would have more adverse impacts on children rather than positive ones. In following I will investigate this issue furthermore.
Firstly, we all know that children require physical activities. Accordingly, in many cases using every day computer leads to some health issues such as obesity and poor eyesight. Secondly, according to many experts, using computer in some cases can be addictive. Thus, it may cause some children to sp...
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Better not give your opinions at the introduction in order to have a better organization. Like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: idea one.
para 3: however, idea two
para 4: in my opinion...
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