It is generally observed that almost all high level jobs are done by men. Does it means that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women.
Do you agree or disagree with this proposition.
The absolute topic is controversial. So, no doubt, it is little laborious to criticise it. An argument has been put forward that almost all high level jobs are done by men. Personally,I tempt to think that it does not mean that government should motivate a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women. In this case, I make some efforts of discuss my outlook in below paragraphs.
There are a plethora of reasons why I disagree with this statement. The first point which comes to my mind is that government should not reserve the jobs only for women. To elaborate, government should p...
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I make some efforts of discuss my outlook in below paragraphs.
I make some efforts to discuss my outlook in below paragraphs.
government should provide jobs to those candidates who deserve for it.
Description: 'it' refers to what? Be sensitive to use 'it'.
After poundering over a great deal of thoughts and deliberation with myself. I come to this conclusion,
After poundering over a great deal of thoughts and deliberation with myself, I come to this conclusion,
Sentence: So, no doubt, it is little laborious to criticise it.
Error: criticise Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: After poundering over a great deal of thoughts and deliberation with myself.
Error: poundering Suggestion: No alternate word
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Avg. Sentence Length: 12 21.0
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 264 350
No. of Characters: 1227 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.648 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.551 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.135 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.318 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.461 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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