As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
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Sentence: Therefore, with the current knowledge level of mankind, it is safe to say that in most cases, with acquistion of more knowledge, things do become more mysterious and complex.
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Sentence: With the invention of telescope, the paths of stellar objects atleast within most of the solar system, remained no longer a mystery.
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Sentence: However, the are still too far from understaning its almost infinte complexity and there is no guarantee that anytime in future humans will be able to fully understand the universe.
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Sentence: Summing up,the enhancement of knowledge does bring us closer towards understaning and simplifying various aspects of universe.
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Sentence: Such phenoman introduce new variables in the existing mysteries thereby making the problems less comprehensible instead of simpifying them.
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