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How chocolate is made and the price of a chocolate bar is divided up
A glance at the picture, it describes the process of making chocolate and proportion of the price for one chocolate bar.
At the first graph,the production process is commenced by grinding cocoa beans, resulting waste and cocoa liquor. There are two ways utilizing cocoa liquor to produce a chocolate bar, either being sold to industrial chocolate or continuing to the next step.
When cocoa liquor enters ‘pressing-process’, it yields two main ingredients, cocoa butter and cocoa powder. Cocoa butter, however, would be sold to the chocolate factory and combined with sugar to finalize the c...
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