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Some People Say that Giving aid to poor countries has more negative effect than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A sense of solidarity among countries throughout the world has increased considerably in the last decade. The developed countries compete actively for providing assistance to the unprosperous countries. Consequently, it causes unfavourable circumstance between those countries. Although the cause is reasonable, I believe that the awareness of the nations gives a commendable impact either for developed countries or developing countries.
United States, a superpower nation, give aid consistently to poor countries such as Zimbabwe, Burundi, and Liberia. CNN News report that USA spend one billion...
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United States, a superpower nation, give aid consistently
United States, a superpower nation, gives aid consistently
USA spend one billion dollars
USA spends one billion dollars
Sentence: This example is proves that giving aid to poor countries has more negative impact.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and proves
Sri Lanka had given humanitarian assistance
Sri Lanka had been given humanitarian assistance
Sentence: The developed countries compete actively for providing assistance to the unprosperous countries.
Error: unprosperous Suggestion: No alternate word
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