In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
The speaker asserts that those in power should step down after five years in any profession because the surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. I fundamentally agree with the speaker for that limiting the term of leadership is an effective way to prevent corruption and lack of initiative. However, in my view, not for all enterprises the way of revitalization regularly is necessary, useful or profitable. The speaker magnifies the validity of the power of revitalization and overlooks some negative influence by this way.
Firstly, when leaders have no...
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