Although spending thirty minutes doing physical exercises at least five days a week to keep healthy is highly recommended by most doctors, almost all adults ignore this reminder. This essay will outline multiple feasible solutions and examples to help these people exercise.
To begin with, the first measure to motivate adults to do physical exercises is to raise awareness amongst people about the detrimental effects on health due to a chronic shortage of exercise. Lack of sufficient physical activities such as football or basketball, especially on those who are over 40, might contribute to several metabolic diseases including obesity which could prevent human beings from being confident and good health. Authorities should organize many sports competitions, like marathons, to encourage citizens to keep fit through partaking in these activities. Gradually, they might see a considerable improvement in their body and mood which dramatically releases stress during personal life.
Moreover, as adults especially breadwinner must cover many types of expenses revolving around family, they work really hard from 7 am to 5 pm every single day due to the specific work. As a result, they barely have time for doing physical activities. Local authorities must enact laws that limit the maximum amount of hours for employees; therefore, adults could acquire reluctant hours for not only doing exercises but also taking care of family members.
Some might argue that everyone could spend thirty minutes per day engaging in physical exercises with ease, so having lesser hours for working is not necessary. However, people could suffer from a high-level of stress after a long at work, and thus they only will easily fall asleep rather than consider participating in any such physical activities.
In conclusion, despite being recommended by most doctors, most adults nowadays are not in favor of doing sports. Arising awareness about dangerous diseases and reducing the average working time per day could partly encourage these people to partake in physical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, at least, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46728971963 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70639245612 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5790668375 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288773341213 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100965518531 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876725940113 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1714540164 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854170804969 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.33 Out of 6
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