Advertisement plays a major role on TV in developed market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people are critical of the role of TV advertising. Write an essay analyzing the positive and negative effects of TV advertisement
it can not be denied that tv has become one of indispensable thing in almost every family. going with the development of tv, there is a huge industry about the advertisement with many arguments around it. some people think advertisement brings a lot of positive effect to the society in general and to the economy in specific. On the other hand, some people argue that advertisement on tv can bring bad influence to people. In this essay, i will analyze both side arguments.
Firstly, advertisement can bring the information to customers about the products, and it leads to the fact that people can enhance their quality of life. Without promotion, the customers will never know about the new products, and oppositely, with the good promotion, customers will know the existence of new products and information about it. these promotion campaigns bring the benefits not only to the suppliers, but also to the customers. With the newest updated products going with the information, people are likely to stay in great chance to buy suitable products to them. Obviously, these suitable products will improve society's quality of life.
secondly, with more information about the products, people tend to buy more, and it creates chances for the economy to grow by the increasing demand. Needless to say, people will buy more when they see interesting products even they may not use it. Have you ever come to the mall, and want to buy many beautiful things, and end up you never touch on it ? To the side of consumers, it can be bad, but if you look up at the economy side, this will be positive side. The demand increases will lead to the higher economic growth and lower unemployment problem. As a result, the society as a whole will benefit from the higher demand coming from advertisement on the tv.
even the undeniable benefits, there are some drawbacks that peole should concern about it.
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- Advertisement plays a major role on TV in developed market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people are critical of the role of TV advertising. Write an essay analyzing the positive and negative effects of TV advertisement 56
- Advertisement plays a major role on TV in developed market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people are critical of the role of TV advertising. Write an essay analyzing the positive and negative effects of TV advertisement 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89130434783 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69366214228 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512422360248 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6478241762 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6470588235 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164881078711 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590702557562 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619262680064 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101771841412 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107417994358 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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