The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005

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The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.

The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female students choosing certain university topis in the specific 2005.
The number of students choosing social sciences in university was highest in all 8 subjects. Remarkably, the number of men was higher than that of women in the sciences, mathematics, law, and literature, the opposite was true for the others in 2005.

The number of males selecting sciences in university was twice as high as that of females, at about 22 and 11 thousand people respectively, compared to nearly 19 thousand men joining mathematics were high fourfold the number of women, at roughly 4 thousand. For literature and law class, the number of males was more than the number of females at about 4 to 5 million people.

Remarkably, Social Sciences was the most attractive to women students, with around 24 thousand students, compared to about 18 million females and 2 million males participating in the Languages class. While the number of women joining the humanities class was equal to the figure for men, at about 11 million, the art lesson was taken part in by most the females.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75630476087 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0737310876 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.142857143 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169690108815 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114920528052 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122192945752 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161127326698 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14063928728 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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