Benefits of travelling
The act of travelling is believed to provide enormous benefits and great experiences for ourselves. For starters, it helps broaden horizons of several cultures. In other words, as tourists go to another place with cultural differences, they have to learn about customs and traditions to be adaptive to that location, thus gaining more knowledge about exotic cultures. Moreover, it is tourism that connects people from different places. Whenever going to another place, we will be able to meet new people who may have their interests in common and, therefore, expand our social circles. Last but not least, travelling can lessen our stress and improve our health. As we plan to make a tour to somewhere, it is a unique opportunity to escape from the hustle and bustle of the city, be relaxed and enjoy the journey, the peaceful atmosphere and the breath-taking landscapes. To put it briefly, it is advisable that people should make a trip to their favourite places because it does good to our physical and mental health.
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- Self introduction
- Benefits of travelling 56
- Many people say that tourism can be a double edged sword bringing benefits to local people while at the same time damaging the local environment and culture Do you agree with this What can be done by governments tour operators and tourists themselves to m 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72245563892 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664705882353 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0780705802 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115243011993 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570973822643 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112388420551 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115243011993 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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