the best job are the ones that pay more money
there are many direction to think about this.The one and most important one is earning lots of money.it is easy to say "Health is wealth". but now a days there is no wealth without money.so most people thought about the job which pays more is best atleast for them.most of us want to live life with full enjoyment and fun and certainly one way to achieve this is earning lot of money; but is it really true that for money you can do anything? surely not but quite a few do some illegal job that pays lot of money. surely it is not best job from our perspective but what about person doing that illegal job? Let's say he/she is very poor person and he/she has no way to earn income without this illegal xyz job. Though that person is ethically correct he/she find that job best since he/she has to take care his/her family or children basic needs. so from his/her perspective this is best job for survival of his/her family. so this thing leads to satisfaction of family/children is important for that person. now we go to second case where person is very greedy and do whatever for money ; so till his/her satisfaction of greedy mind he/she will do that job irrespective of legality ; so in this case also satisfaction is important. now take case of good and pure social worker ; he/she will do job for satisfaction of needy people and he/she do that job until the issue become solved or until the satisfaction of his/her mind. so all in all the best job are the ones that pay satisfaction to human mind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
there are many direction to think about this....
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun direction seems to be countable; consider using: 'many directions'.
Suggestion: many directions
there are many direction to think about this.The one and most im...
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Suggestion: The
... are many direction to think about this.The one and most important one is earning l...
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Suggestion: But
...sy to say 'Health is wealth'. but now a days there is no wealth without m...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...o say 'Health is wealth'. but now a days there is no wealth without money.so mos...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...y 'Health is wealth'. but now a days there is no wealth without money.so mos...
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Suggestion: Surely
...rue that for money you can do anything? surely not but quite a few do some illegal job...
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Suggestion: Surely
...ome illegal job that pays lot of money. surely it is not best job from our perspective...
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...at about person doing that illegal job? Lets say he/she is very poor person and he/s...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...that person is ethically correct he/she find that job best since he/she has to take ...
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Suggestion: So
...his/her family or children basic needs. so from his/her perspective this is best j...
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Suggestion: So
...est job for survival of his/her family. so this thing leads to satisfaction of fam...
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Suggestion: Now
.../children is important for that person. now we go to second case where person is ve...
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Suggestion: Now
...is case also satisfaction is important. now take case of good and pure social worke...
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Suggestion: does
...satisfaction of needy people and he/she do that job until the issue become solved ...
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Suggestion: So
...until the satisfaction of his/her mind. so all in all the best job are the ones th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50909090909 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49941766418 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498181818182 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5507102147 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332635777135 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149165004904 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107114849102 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332635777135 0.151304729494 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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