Causes and solutions of the unemployment
In recent years, the issue of unemployment is a suffer for the majority of countries in the world. However, I believe that there are several measurements to address this problem. This essay will discuss problems related to unemployment and measures that can be taken to address these problems.
In my opinion, the unemployment rate is rising for some particular reasons. One of the most obvious problems is due to the development of technology. Machines are gradually replacing people to work on the production lines. Graduted students don’t have enough nesscesary skills to control modern machines. Another worrying trend is economic recession. The economic downturn leads many companies to go bankrupt and downsize. So, lots of companies are mass layoffs and fewer vacancies. The last serious effect is environmal pollution. Environmal pollution leads to depletion of resources, the jobs related to resource exploitaytion is affected. For example, sea pollution leads to unemployed fishermen. For instance, in polluted lands, farmer can’t grow crops. In short, technological development, economic downturn and environmental pollution are three major causes of unemployment.
In terms of solutions, to tackle these problem, I believe that innovation in education to train highly skilled workers need to be implemented. Education has to focus more on teaching practical skills and practicum programs. In addition, it is necessary to revise training programs to keep up with the technological development. Another good idea is that the goverment must have the policy of sustainable economic development. Finally, I suppose that the goverment must impose strict pollution laws and harsh fines or penalties on factories which break pollution laws to protect the environment.
In conclusion, the unemployment is a major problem for many countries. I believe that with the above analysic of causes and solutions, we will take the right steps to overcome unemployment.
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Probably, unemployment is
Probably, unemployment is becoming an increasingly considerable malice over the recent years.The reasons behind this threat are manifold which affect the individuals and society tremendously.This essay will suggest a handful of initiatives to be taken to ameliorate the situation.
To commence, above all the causes engendering this hindrance,the first and foremost is illiteracy which becomes a significant hurdle in acquiring a white collar job to the scholars which leads a person to suffer from a miserable life.Moreover,such a person can not put its contribution for the devlopment of an ideal society.The people in Nepal despite thinking of the progress of the economy of the nation,instead they ,merely,ponder about their personl expences like food, shelter and other basic amenities, for instance.
Probing further,the another factor to be taken into account is malpractices prevalent in the state as the political power is in corrupt hands and they either utilise the public funding for personl lavish lifestyle and luxury cars which is to be used for remunerations of the government employees or they use it unwisely.Hence,thus cause for failure of government that does not commence with the recruitment procedure.Consequently, the youngsters tend to migerate to the Western countries from Eastern countries particularly.
However,to curb this menace,people should educate their children until they are not of fourteen as per govenment norms.If the would implement this tendency,socielty would definitely flourish in terms of wealth and economic prosperity.Furthermore,government should distribute the public funding in such a way that everyone should have as much as wages that they could fulfill fundament requirements of their menage. Regardless of these remedies, regime should also be accountable for ensuring an economy which provide all fundamental rights regarding work and enjoyment of payable salary.
In conclusion,administrative authorities and general publish should join hand to hand to overcome this epidemic before spreading.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, as to, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63545150502 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13593976132 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3221000603 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5909090909 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5909090909 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128707649574 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033914174013 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502962594973 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900109509021 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585753907303 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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