Describe educational goals career aspirations and how a scholarship will help you at the college

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 116, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...p my skills and experience in my chosen field. It provides financial stability so tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46318289786 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24394430601 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61757719715 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9236403571 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.523809524 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0476190476 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918690962335 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263011108096 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237403943865 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460124235657 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110470448259 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.33 Out of 6
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