In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Nowadays, thanks to the increasing development over the world, there is a marked increase in people's span. However, the phenomenon can cause financial issue and the decrease in workforce, which are the major problems. This essay will go further about them and suggest some measures to deal with the question of the increase in the average life expectancy.
To begin with, this problem can affect each country's economy. As a matter of fact, the rise in people's lifetime would raise the number of old people who are eligible for more pensions. Also, when they are getting older, they tend to have diseases and use more healthcare services. Besides, the drop in the amount of workforce is one main issue that needs considering.
There are several things needed to be done to deal with this problem. One answer is the government should increase the age of retiring from 65 to 70. The second, also the last solution is to encourage immigration, which can directly affect the number of labor force in each nation.
In conclusion, economic problem and labor decrease are primary problems of the increase in people's span; increasing the age of retiring and encouraging immigration can help stop this question from becoming worse
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56658727539 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7425599878 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225194719467 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772375895908 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750904346306 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134884704698 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791419343725 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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